Heading:
2nd Exchange
Subheading (Process title):
Exchange
Descriptor (what was done):
I found this exchange much more useful, just because I had a few spread to show them,
one thing that came up was that some of our text was a bit light and I had to add some more information so it was more clear to understand. Apart from that they really liked the idea of the kids storybook and the illustrations.
Reflection what was achieved / what was found out / how it advanced the project):
from this critique I went back over with my group to add more information/stats in some of the text. we are now happy with the text and think its more clear now .
